Wednesday, April 15, 2015

poetry essay

poetry essay for "My Papa's Waltz" and "Those Winter Sundays"

There are good ways and bad ways for a father to express love for his son. In "Those Winter Sundays" by Robert Hayden the father expresses love for his son by getting up early every day and working hard to make his son comfortable. In "My Papa's Waltz" by Theodore Roethkethe the father expresses his love by fooling around, drinking, and making a mess. The father in "Those Winter Sundays" has a better way of showing the love he has for his son.

Both fathers in the poems work hard doing some form of labor, but the father in "Those Winter Sundays" works harder and does more work for his son than the one in "My Papa's Waltz. The father in "Those Winter Sundays" doesn't fool around making more work for his family by making a mess, he wakes up early every morning and builds a fire. In "Those Winter Sundays" it says "I'd wake and hear the cold splintering breaking/ when the rooms were warm, he'd call/ and slowly I would rise and dress,.' His father woke up early and made a fire so his family could get dressed in the warm. This is a sacrifice the speaker's dad made for him to express his love. He spent his time making sure his son was comfortable. The father in 'My Pap's Walt" spent the free time he had drinking and fooling around with his son. The poem says "The whiskey on your breath/ could make a small boy dizzy/ but I hung on like death/ such waltzing was not easy." The speaker's father obviously had a lot to drink if it could "make a small boy dizzy" and after drinking he waltzed around the house with his son in not the most pleasant way. Both fathers love their sons but the father in "Those Winter Sundays" expresses it in a more positive and thoughtful way.

Both these fathers are hardworking. In "Those Winter Sundays" The father wakes up early in the cold for his family. Th poem says "Sundays too my father got up early/ and put on his clothes in the blue black cold,/ then with cracked hands that ached from labor in the weekday weather made/ banked fires blaze." Even on Sundays which is a day of rest the father gets up early instead of sleeping like the rest of his family. He has has hands that are cracked and aching so he works hard with his hands in a field of work that is very difficult. In "My Papa's Waltz it says "You beat time on my head with a palm caked hard by dirt." The dad works hard at work doing some form of labor which is why his palm is caked with dirt, but doesn't seem to do work for his son like the father in "Those Winter Sundays" who woke up early every day even Sunday morning to build a fire so his son could get dressed in the warm and he also polished his good shoes. 

Both poems are about children remembering their fathers. In "Those Winter Sundays" the son is remembering how much work his dad did for him and how he didn't thank him. In "My Papa's Waltz" the son is remembering a fun moment with his father, even though his father expressed his love in a weird way.


A Wrinkle in Time Literary essay

"Darkness cannot drive out darkness only light can do that, hate cannot drive out hate only love can do that." This is one of Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.'s most memorable quotes. Meg from A Wrinkle in Time by Madeleine L'engle can relate to Dr. King's inspiring words, because Meg learned from personal experience that only love can defeat hate and only light can conquer darkness. Through this book Meg travels through time and space to find her lost father, with her brother, Charles Wallace and her friend Calvin. Meg's father is trapped behind the dark thing and in order to get him she must fight the dark thing. Ms. Who, Ms. Whatsit, and Ms. Which who are magical beings who were once stars lead her on this journey. However, before Meg can fight the dark thing she must know what she's up against. In order to do this Ms. Whatsit takes Meg, Charles Wallace and Calvin to a planet with a very thin atmosphere so they can see the dark thing. Since they are human and require oxygen to stay alive, Ms. Whatsit gave them beautiful flowers that gave them the oxygen they needed to survive on this planet, in order to see the dark thing. 

Meg needs to fight the dark thing in order to save her father's life. The flower lets her see the dark thing all while keeping her alive so she can accomplish her goal. "The atmosphere is so thin here," Ms.Whatsit said as though an answer to her unasked question, "That it does not obscure your vision as it would at home. Now look straight ahead." Meg, Charles Wallace and Calvin have never known about the dark thing, because u can't see it from Earth, but now even though she hasn't known about it, or seen it for very long the dark thing is all Meg can thing about, because it is what is standing in the way of being with her father. "Meg's hand holding the blossoms slowly dropped and it seemed as though a knife gashed through her lungs. She gasped, but there was no air for her to breath. Darkness glazed her eyes and mind, but as she started to fall into unconsciousness her head dropped down into the flowers which she was still clutching; and as she inhaled the fragrance of their purity her mind and body revived, and she sat up again." The flower is what is keeping Meg alive and allowing her to fight. Without it the darkness will take her life and her fathers only hope of escaping the Dark thing. The flower symbolizes life and love which Meg needs to defeat the Dark thing. 

In order to help Charles Wallace get out of the control of IT Meg has to let go of her hate and show what she has that IT doesn't have: love. In order to save Charles Wallace she shows how much she loves him. "No, it was not anger it was loathing; it was hatred, sheer and unadulterated, and as she became lost in hatred she also began to be lost in IT. Meg thought that what she had that IT didn't have was hate. She thought that if she hated IT enough, IT would loose it's control over Charles Wallace. But it has hate, hate made it worse, hate makes everything worse. If Meg kept on hating IT, IT would have taken control of Meg. Luckily Meg realizes that hate is not the way to win over Charles Wallace, love was!

IN order for Meg to clearly see what she has to do she needs help. The flower is not the only thing to help Meg, in the end it is also the help of Ms. Who, Ms. Whatsit, and Ms. Which. Meg learns from them that she has to use what IT doesn't have, to save Charles Wallace, love. Meg's love is what saves Charles Wallace's life. Meg realized that hate got her no where only love did. 

Sunday, February 1, 2015

Contact sports argument essay

Parents want their kids to be safe while playing sports. Sports have gotten safer over the years, but many kids still get hurt playing contact sports.  Participation in youth football has dropped, because people are realizing how dangerous youth sports can be.  President Obama said that if he had a son, he might not let him play football for fear of being injured.  Teens shouldn’t play contact sports, because they can get a serious injury and because they can feel pressured to win.
    Contact sports can give teens unnecessary stress.  Teens want to win, it is a natural part of being human, but that can lead to stress.  Teens don’t want to lose and let their teammates or themselves down.  The pressure to succeed can be overwhelming -- and that can lead to a lot of frustration and tears.  In some cases, sports pressure is self-inflicted.  Some kids are natural perfectionists and are just too hard of themselves when things don’t go their way.  “Teens want to play perfectly and when they don’t or can’t it can lead to stress and tears.   Teens want the respect of their coaches and parents, but sometimes trying to meet the demands of these adults can be harmful. “  Kidshealth.org.   More often than not, the pressure is external.  Kids try to satisfy the demands of a parent, coach, or other authority figure and end up feeling like winning is the only way to gain the approval of the adults they respect. Teens don’t want to let down their parent or coach.  The popularity of contact sports push players to work harder to prove that they are talented and so they don’t let down their classmates or schools.
    Many teens get injured or even killed when they play contact sports.  Since teens are still growing, they can get injured easily.  Because of this, kids should try to be safe.  “in 2013, there were 1.24 million emergency room visits by kids who got injured during sports.”  www.wsj.com/videos/How Children and Teens can avoid sports injuries. Teens should not be getting injured while playing sports especially in such large numbers.  According to the Huffington Post, “39 football players have died since 2000 because of injuries they got from playing.”  For anyone to die while playing a sport is ridiculous.  People play sports to be healthy and have fun.  Some sports are obviously too dangerous for teens, because they are getting injured and dying.  Harsher rules and regulations should be put in place so teens are safe and stop dying young from something that supposed to be healthy.
    Some people say that competition is good for you and helps you learn life skills, but it can cause kids to hurt themselves and others.  Some people think that competition is needed and you should have a lot of it.  “Competition by its very nature is barbaric. You survive and adapt by beating others.” If a sports is so competitive that it becomes barbaric, the rules should be changed so that it is not barbaric.  One of the key aspects of contact sports is that the competition between players and teams is played out in a physical way.  Teens want to win to prove themselves, for their team, friends, school or to get a college scholarship.  The Wall Street Journal says, “42% of kids who play sports said they had played injured.” www.wsj.com/videos/How Children and Teens can avoid sports injuries.    Playing injured can make the injury so much worse.  Teens shouldn’t feel pressured by themselves or others to play injured.
    Parents shouldn’t be letting their kids do something that is dangerous to them and others around them.  No matter how fun playing a s sport can be, it would be a lot more fun if teens weren’t getting hurt.  Contact sports can be too much for teens and something has to be done about it to make the lives of teens who play contact sports healthier and safer.

Wednesday, October 8, 2014

Eleanor, strong, deep, and bright like Eleanor Roosevelt. I was named after her. I think  Eleanor is a powerful and elegant name which is so not me. I think My parents named me after Eleanor Roosevelt because they know she was a strong women, and admired her for her devotion to human rights and those less fortunate. I feel strongly about many causes that are important like the environment,and animal rights. I think that if she was alive today she would also feel strongly about those issues to, along with many others that I feel strongly about. As I grow up I hope I become more like her in the fact that she fought for what was right and what she believed in. I also hope that my interest in issues grows even stronger like Eleanor’s did.

I like to be called Elly which I think  is way more bright and cheerful than Eleanor, way more me. To me the name Elly is more fun and happy. It's like the sun, a big ball of energy and brightness in one little four letter name.

Mostly when I’m with my friends I go by Elly which Ilike because I’m more happy and cheery when I’m with them and not serious, which I can be but not often. I think that Eleanor and Elly are like two different sides of the same me, two names, two sides, one me. 

     This summer, I read the Selected Series (The Selected, The Elite, The One) by Kiera Cass.  I really liked the books, because the characters' perspective changes, changing my view of the characters too.  I also liked how throughout the books the author wrote in small facts and details that in the end all connect together.
      First of all, I liked the books because I was always learning new information on characters which changed my view of them.  For example, I started out the book liking Aspen. who is American's boyfriend (she is the main character)  When he broke up with her when she thought he was going to propose, I didn't like him anymore.  Later in the book, I got his side of the story, I liked him again.  It went on and off as I learned more about him and what he was made of.
     Another reason, I liked the books is that the author added small details throughout the book that you would slowly put together and finally fully understand the point at the end of the book. Throughout the book I got more information on the rebels such as that some of the rebels were peaceful and that America's dad was a rebel.  The fact that she was named America and a lot of meaning since America was a fallen country.
      I really liked these books because they had many layers.  You have to keep reading to find out what's next,and I never knew what was going to happen next.